Script: Refined

After some thought into the story, i have made both insignificant and very vital changes to the script. The main change being the swap of the second male character to be replaced with an elegant female character. Reasons? There was the issue brought up of the script demonstrating some form of campaign for a homosexual act. Now although i have not exactly defined a purpose for the story, it was definitely not an intention to relate it to anything like that remark. So i changed the character for this specific reason.

Here is the updated script: